Success Criteria (based on Kidspeak progressions)
- beginning, middle and end (structure)
- topic words (vocabulary)
- different sentence beginnings (sentence formation)
- added detail to my ideas (content and ideas)
- My goal is to often include detail/comment to support or elaborate to the main ideas
Introduction
Jamie Curry has many talents but shines as a comedic actress and is known to be one of the most famous teenagers in New-Zealand. Jamie Curry is a self deprecated young lady who gives anything a go.
Who Is she
Jamie is a Hawksbay girl and attended Sacred Hutt college in her previous years. She lives with her mum Bronwyn, dad Lance and sister Tayla. In Jamie's spare time she loves to hangout with friends and play soccer for her local club Marist. Although Jamie posts daily she doesn't know much about digital. She has already appeared in a music video, and has also toured the UK as an Mc for a british boy band.
Early Life
Bronwyn Jamie’s mum was always worried about homework, Bronwyn would disconnect the internet when she thought Jamie had spent too much time on her device. In July 2011 Jamie's friends convinced her to start a Facebook page up which is now called Jamie's World. When she was interviewed she said she originally made her page for her friends. By Christmas time that year she had over 100,000 views. Jamie's World now has 6.5million likes on facebook and close to 200,000 followers on Twitter. Conclusion
Jamie Curry is still posting videos and updating states for her followers. Already she has been a nominated for young New Zealander of the year.
Cool K.K Jamie curry sounds awesome I loved how presented your work
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